Okay, I’ve been putting off posting this for a while, because I’m always afraid of non-constructive criticism. But, I am tired of looking at it sitting there, waiting for me to post it. So here you go. This is my nearly-complete, but eternally-unfinished screenplay. I’d love to hear any and all feedback you have on it. Tell me what works, what doesn’t, what’s funny, what’s not, what scenes you think are missing.
Click to open. Option-click on a Mac to download. Right-click and choose “Save As…” in Windows to do the same.